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1.19.2009

in the meanwhile...

chapter 1 is on its way...sorry to keep you waiting

here is a poem I wrote in English:

a ghost of a bond

it is 10:27
in the morning and the light
is blinding against the
snow and we talk
but not with each other
we know me
we know you
but not who we are
together as one
a mental bond that no one
can detect
a secret--
shh... --
love that exists beyond this
dimension in a totally
twisted world where
ignorance does not exist
and we acknowledge
we acknowledge
but not here
you don't see me crying
hot tears of heartbreaking
misery
and you just live as if no
ethereal relationship exists between
US
how sweet it sounds but it
doesn't exist.
not here.

what do you think???

8 comments:

about me said...

sorry about leaving in a hurry on gchat...my mom walked in so i had to go...sorry...i like the poem...very original..keep writing

ChloeAmanda said...

thats really really good :):)

thankyou for making it un-private lol.

made my day now just reading that!!

loveeeya :] xxxxxxxxx

Daisy said...

Ahh I really like this ! :)

Melmo Momoko said...

that's great!

Anonymous said...

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Couture Carrie said...

Beautiful, darling!

xoxox,
CC

Cait said...

I like.

Mirka said...

beautiful poem

xx